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The Essence of Air by *barkhouse686:iconbarkhouse686:



An explanation using words that haven't been invented yet
Seems the only way I know how to describe the smell of the rain
In all honesty hoping only to make but perfect sense
I couldn't lay the blame only on the mixture of clouds and sky

Rather a combination of things left simple and untouched
Drowning down the earth in a saturation of cool wet sounds
Leaking and leaving trees spitting and shaking
Inhaling and stretching every ripple of bark; refreshing

Puddles being patient as polka dots animate the surface
One after another and another sooner than later
Plenty to go around acting perfectly as perfume spritz
Filling the air and filling my chest with cool breaths of wet bliss

If there were ever a way to cure disease and unhappiness
It would be to drink the air that lingers longer than the rain does
A damp earth pulsing and babbling through to the center of your heart
Rinsing as it does the air and tasting as it does the sound

Bottle this atmosphere for me and put me on oxygen
Leave me alone in a field to die and I'll stay alive forever
'Cause this is all I've ever know when I've looked for lucid and pure
And I'll gladly take it with my favorite ecstasy raptured grin.
©2009-2010 *barkhouse686
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it's raining :aww:

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:iconobsidian-fox:
I really love the smell of rain, and i really love these words, put together as such :)

:aww:

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::) Thank yooou, I wish I knew better how to put into words how freakishly overpowering my sense of smell is! That poem will take a long long time to write.

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What's your favorite smell?

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i have no idea whatsoever, there's just too many.

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:iconobsidian-fox:
Hmm, im going to make pancakes with strawberries and waft the scent towards FSJ so you come searching the delicious pancakes I made for you :aww:

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Photography is the simultaneous recognition, in a fraction of a second, of the significance of an event. (HCB)
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haha perfect, ill just follow my noooose! like toucan lol

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:iconobsidian-fox:
haha, just dont text while driving fast through the mountains :aww:

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Photography is the simultaneous recognition, in a fraction of a second, of the significance of an event. (HCB)
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haha what why not? i'm a pro ;p

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because I would be really sad if you got in an accident :(

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